Thursday, January 25, 2007

freeze frame

crash and burn , spin and splatter
every sense convoluted
every reality distorted
then a fleeting stillness
that i stumbled upon in this dance of perspectives

can i stretch it?
elongate it so it lasts till i chose it?
can i walk inside the bubble?
and watch mesmerised

can i shift it?
a little to the left and 2 inches forward
can i add colour?
a rainbow perhaps?

can i own it?
play with it like a faviriote pet
dream about it like an obsession


can i make another one just like it?

3 comments:

ranjit kandalgaonkar said...

mere link pe @ dala hai!
isliye nahi chalta :(
plis to make correction:)

make more looong post na.

Fanaah said...

I like that line 'walk inside the bubble'. Imagined myself doing that-unfortunately the pin is under my feet.

sundarsonal said...

very lovely itis.. love your writing baby. lots of pictures.